At
Medium on September 5, 2020 there is a very useful
article by Jay Krasnow titled
10 Editing Tips Writers Need to Know (one
involves bean soup). They can be applied to speechwriting, PowerPoint, and blog
posts. I have paraphrased them as follows:
Don’t leave out the main ingredient – be sure there are beans
in the bean soup.
Look at your copy upside-down.
Check all the names (people and places).
Verify the pairs (parentheses, brackets).
Are all acronyms defined when they first are used?
Verify the phone numbers, addresses, and hyperlinks.
Do titles and section headings make sense?
Look for clusters of errors.
Make sure you read it out loud.
Check your formatting.
When you look at your printed copy upside-down, spacing
errors and weird fonts will stand out. In Patrick Winston’s presentation on
How
to Speak (discussed in
my previous post) at 31:48 he described looking at a printout
of a presentation to see if the slides were too heavy – cursed with solid blocks
of text.
The last thing I do with a blog post after I publish it is
to go back and add all the hyperlinks. Then I view it, and click on the
hyperlinks to see they all work. When reading through the post I may find
errors not caught by the spell checker in Word – like accidentally leaving the
h off of harm.
In Jeff Smith’s 1990 cookbook
The Frugal Gourmet on Our
Immigrant Ancestors the recipe for
Beef Bulgogi lists ingredients for the
marinade but it doesn’t say how much or what type of beef to use. The text just
says to prepare the beef. A later
web version at
Good Food says it really is
one pound of beef ribeye.
At the
Gem State Patriot News there recently was a pair of
articles by Dr. John Livingston with repeated misspellings.
One on September 3,
2020 titled
Lies and More Lies says flue instead of flu (as shown above). That’s
a cluster of spelling errors. A
second article on September 5, 2020 titled
Do
you believe in miracles? says Devine instead of Divine. (
Andy Devine was a
well-known character actor, but not divinely inspired). In between those two
there is
a third on September 4, 2020 titled
What is an expert? Dr. Livingston
says that:
“An expert is someone who knows a great amount about a small
slice of the world, and most experts fail to see how their small sliver of the
pie relates to the rest of the world.”
But we expect his small sliver to include getting all the spelling
right - rather than depending on an editor to fix that detail. Another
version
of
What is an expert? appears at the
Idaho Freedom Foundation on September 8,
2020 titled
Experts and the people. There the author is listed with his middle
initial as Dr. John M. Livingston. That version was edited to have more
paragraphs.
An
article by Olivia Mitchell at
Speaking About Presenting
describes
9 ways to edit your presentation. Olivia says to have one focus (a
core message), and no more than three main points. Cut anything that does not
relate to the core message, like secondary examples or stories.
Another article by Andrew Dlugan at
Six Minutes on March 4,
2008 is titled
Speech Preparation #5: Six power principles for speech editing.
He says to edit for focus, clarity, concision, continuity, variety, impact and
beauty.