Friday, April 12, 2024

The lovely Japanese Tea Garden in San Antonio began as a rock quarry


 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

On April 11, 2024 I blogged about Viewing a total solar eclipse on a cloudy day in Boerne, Texas. The day before my wife and I met my sisters and their husbands at the lovely Japanese Tea Garden in San Antonio (as shown above). Their web site and the Wikipedia page explain that it originally had been a limestone quarry and cement factory. During World War II, when we were at war with Japan, it was renamed the Chinese Tea Garden.

 

On October 14, 2023 I had posted about Visiting Buchart Gardens near Victoria, British Columbia on September 28, 2023. Those gardens also had begun as a quarry.

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Next to the parking lot is the Barbed Wire BBQ restaurant, where we had an excellent lunch. 

 

 


Thursday, April 11, 2024

Viewing a total solar eclipse on a cloudy day in Boerne, Texas

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Back on August 21, 2017 my wife and I viewed a total solar eclipse in Idaho from a golf course on the shore of Lake Cascade. We had a perfect view with no interfering cloud cover. I blogged about it on August 30, 2017 in a post titled An event that will not soon be eclipsed. That post ended by stating that the next one is is 2024 and perhaps we will see it down in Texas.

 

On April 8, 2024 we glimpsed the total eclipse from the City Park in Boerne, Texas as shown above. We had flown down to San Antonio. Our original plan was to drive northwest about 55 miles to Kerrville where totality would be at about 1:30 PM and last for almost four and a half minutes. But Interstate 10 was clogged by so much traffic that by 12:30 we were only about halfway there. After around 25 miles we stopped at a gas station in Boerne, used the rest room, and found their City Park via a Google search. We drove there and parked at one end in a fenced-in lawn by their Agricultural Museum, which has a large collection of vintage farm equipment. Then we had our lunch while sitting at a picnic table and waited.

 

As we approached totality, the sky was almost completely cloudy. There were only a few seconds where we got to see the moon obscuring the sun. But we saw confused birds land in trees. At totality it got dark as a late night – which still was very impressive. Some folks set off fireworks to celebrate.

 

For the 2017 eclipse we had felt a sudden drastic drop in the temperature. With the clouds in 2024 there was no drastic drop. We drove slowly back to San Antonio on Texas 46 to Bulverde and then US 281 - rather than Interstate 10.    

 


Friday, April 5, 2024

Michael Knowles didn’t like Beyoncé's revised version of the Dolly Parton song Jolene

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Michael Knowles didn’t like Beyoncé's version of the Dolly Parton song, Jolene. He tweeted:

 

“Beyoncé's ‘Jolene’ cover is BAD.”

 

But it wasn’t just a cover - it was a revision. At YouTube you can watch lyric videos of both Dolly’s version, and Beyoncé's version. And at NME on April 1, 2024 there is an article by Hollie Geraghty titled Beyonce gives Dolly Parton sole songwriting credit on ‘Jolene’ that is subtitled The country icon previously gave Beyoncé's new version her seal of approval.

 

I don’t think we should we pay much attention to a negative evaluation by a political commentator like Mr. Knowles. He’s not an expert on music or songwriting. His review reminded me of my December 28, 2012 blog post titled Soapbox Guru is a web site for posting videos of speeches or presentations and receiving evaluations. In it I mentioned that back on January 23, 2010 consulting expert Alan Weiss had panned Taylor Swift’s live performance on the Help for Haiti telethon. A week later Taylor won four Grammy Awards – Album of the Year and Best Country Album for Fearless, and Best Country Song and Best Female Country Vocal Performance for White Horse.

 

The thumbs down was adapted from this image at Wikimedia Commons.

 


Thursday, April 4, 2024

Willie Nelson tells stories behind his songs in the book Energy Follows Thought


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

At my friendly local public library I found and enjoyed reading a 2023 book by Willie Nelson (with David Ritz and Mickey Raphael) titled Energy Follows Thought: The stories behind my songs. It is big: 9.25” wide by 11.25” high by 1.25” thick, has almost 400 pages and weighs 3.83 pounds. On the back cover it says:

 

“I see these lyrics as little postcards from a long life. I see them as expressions of sadness or joy, fear or frustration, heartache and hope that are all part of our daily struggle to stay sane.”

 

Willie was born way back on April 29, 1933, so he is almost 91. He wrote Night Life, recorded it in 1960 and reissued in 1963. You can listen to it here on YouTube. The lyrics are:

 

“When the evening sun goes down

You will find me hanging round

The night life ain’t no good life

But it’s my life

 

Many people just like me

Dreaming of old used-to-be’s

And the night life ain’t no good life

But it’s my life

 

Listen to the blues they’re playing

Listen to what the blues are saying

 

Mine is just another scene

From the world of broken dreams

And the night life ain’t no good life

But it’s my life”

 

In the book Willie says:

 

“When I first met Ray Charles, who became one of my best friends, he said, ‘Willie, I gotta be honest. When I first heard ‘Night Life,’ I was sure it was written by a Black man.’ ‘Thank you,’ was my quick reply. It was one of the nicest compliments I’ve ever received.” 

 

He also wrote the song Crazy, which was recorded by Patsy Cline and released in October 1961. It was a hit and reached #2 on the Billboard charts both for Hot Country and Adult Contemporary. Willie claims he saw Patsy’s husband, Charlie Dick, past midnight at a Nashville bar called the Orchid Lounge (next to the Ryman Auditorium which was home for the Grand Old Opry radio show). He played it for Charlie, who insisted they take it immediately to Patsy and make her listen to it, at about 1:00 AM. On YouTube you can hear both Patsy’s 2:45 hit version and Willie’s slower 4:01 version.     

 

The title song of the book begins with these verses:

 

“Imagine what you want

Then get out of the way

Remember energy follows thought

So be careful what you say

 

Be careful what you ask for

Make sure it’s really what you want

Because your mind is made for thinking

And energy follows thought”

 

My cartoon was modified from two at Openclipart: one of a scheming boy and one of thunder and lightning.

 


Wednesday, April 3, 2024

Baseless conspiracy theories about the collapse of the Francis Scott Key Bridge in Baltimore

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

On March 26, 2024, at 01:27 EDT, the Francis Scott Key Bridge in Baltimore collapsed after one of its support pillars was struck by the container ship M.V. Dali. Eight construction workers were filling potholes on the bridge. Two were rescued, and the other six died.There is an AP article by Ben Finley and James Pollard on March 30, 2024 titled What we know about the Baltimore bridge collapse.


Almost immediately there were claims it was a terrorist act. On the Coast-to-Coast-AM radio show, John M. Curtis (who writes as Online Columnist) claimed ISIS-K was responsible. An article by Tess Owen at The Guardian on March 27, 2024 is titled Online conspiracy circles galvanize to proclaim Baltimore bridge collapse a ‘black swan event.’ But when you look up the Wikipedia page on Black swan theory, you will find that a Black Swan event:

 

“First, it is an outlier, as it lies outside of the realm of regular expectations, because nothing in the past can convincingly point to its possibility. Second, it carries an extreme ‘impact.’ Third, in spite of its outlier status, human nature makes us concoct explanations for its occurrence after the fact, making it explainable and predictable.”

 

The Key Bridge collapse was NOT the first event of its type, so it is certainly NOT a Black Swan. Back on May 9, 1980 the Sunshine Skyway Bridge over Lower Tampa Bay collapsed after being hit by a ship. 35 people died. On April 17, 2023 I blogged about A great video course on Epic Engineering Failures and the Lessons They Teach. In the course that Tampa event is discussed under #6, Vehicle Collisions.   

 

There are other articles lamenting all of these online conspiracies. One by Mary Whitfill Roeloffs at Forbes on March 27, 2024 is titled Baltimore bridge collapse sparks wild conspiracies – even though officials continue to dispel them. A second by David Gilbert at Wired on March 27, 2024 is titled Online conspiracies about the Baltimore bridge collapse are out of control. And a third by A.W. Ohlheiser at Vox on March 28, 2024 is titled The slow death of Twitter is measured in disasters like the Baltimore bridge collapse. There also is a ten-minute YouTube video by Donie O’Sullivan at CNN titled ‘Ridiculous’: Reporter reacts to conspiracy theories about Baltimore bridge collapse.

 

A later article by Ramon Padilla, Trevor Hughes, and Shawn J. Sullivan at USA Today on March 29, 2024 is titled How Francis Scott Key Bridge was lost: A minute-by-minute visual analysis of the collapse. It looks more like a complicated accident.

 

Before and after Images of the bridge are from Wikimedia Commons.

 


Tuesday, April 2, 2024

An inspiring quote about speechwriting at its best


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

At the Pro Rehetoric website there is an article on October 29, 2014 with an address to the European Speechwriters Conference in Amsterdam by Jan Sonneveld titled How speechwriting changed me. His concluding paragraphs say:

 

“Fellow speechwriters:

 

If there is one thing that summarizes best all the things I’ve learned over the past three years, it is this: words matter more than we often imagine. If we do our work with great care, then human speech is at its most powerful. We shape ideas into words and stories, creating worlds in the hearts and minds of so many people.

 

It is not easy. The world is easily deafened by cheap opinions, quick anger and fear. And our daily work is one of too many deadlines, bad public speakers and PowerPoint. But when you see a speaker meet an audience just where they are … When that happens, it is – as the American writer Anne Lamott said – the sensation of unmerited grace.

 

We can make that happen: if the words we write for others – and those we speak ourselves – offer sincerity, honesty and vulnerability.

 

And we can make it happen if our words, as the Dutch poet Henriette Roland Holst wrote on the walls of this room (beside her husband’s murals), ‘bear the hope in our hearts / that makes the dark world light.’

 

The cartoon was adapted from one at Wikimedia Commons.

 


Monday, April 1, 2024

Be your own speechwriting Santa Claus – download a free 74-page e-textbook on Essentials of Speechwriting, and two other briefer publications

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My previous post on March 29, 2024 was titled Good brief advice from Indeed [Canada] on Eight Key Steps to Successful Speech Writing. Where can you find more detailed advice?

 

On December 20, 2023 I had blogged about Getting better at speechwriting by learning from professional organizations. In that post I mentioned the European Speechwriter Network. There is a free download of their 74-page pdf textbook from 2017 by Alan Barker titled Essentials of Speechwriting [Some notes for speechwriters], which accompanies The Essentials of Speechwriting training course. Most sections are just a single page. Section headings and [page numbers] in it are:

 

Introduction [3]

Rhetoric: what it is and why it matters [5]

The five canons of rhetoric [6]

Kairos [7]

Responding to the Kairos: ethos, logos, pathos [8]

Ethos: key features [9]

Logos: key features [10]

Pathos: key features [11]

Thinking about the audience [12]

Audience profiling [13]

Establishing the speech’s objective [14]

Judicial speeches [15]

Deliberative speeches [15]

Ceremonial speeches [16]

Ceremonial speeches: purpose [17]

Ceremonial speeches: goals [18]

Ceremonial speeches: strategies [19]

Invention [20]

Invention: a worked example 21]

Arrangement: the classical model [22]

Arrangement: the classical model explained [23]

Building pyramids [24]

Arrangement: Monroe’s Motivated Sequence [25]

Starting the speech [34]

Seven ways to start a speech [35]

Style? [36]

PRAISE: six elements of style [37]

Proverbs: making your message memorable [38]

Proverbs: rhetorical characteristics [39]

Resonators: making your material concrete [40]

Resonators [41]

Attention: grabbing it and holding it #1 [42]

Attention: grabbing it and holding it #2 [43]

Attention: the curiosity factor [44]

Influence: making yourself credible [45]

Influence: finding your stance [46]

Influence: making your material credible [47]

Stories: involving your audience in the action [48]

Stories: creating a plot [49]

Emotions: stimulating action in your audience [50]

Style: creating a text for speaking [51]

Transitional devices [52]

Varying sentence construction [53]

Verbs: active and passive [54]

Nouns: concrete and abstract [55]

Nominalization [56]

Writing for non-native English speakers [57]

Figures of speech [58]

Working with your speaker [60]

Talking to your speaker [61]

Speechwriter as Consultant [62]

The three modes of appeal revisited [64]

Speechwriter as Coach [67]

Speechwriter as Style Consultant [69]

Speechwriter as Event Manager [70]

Writing for non-native English speakers [71]

Useful resources: books [72]

Useful resources: websites [73]

Alan Barker [74]

 

There also is a 38-page 2010 ebook by Peter Dhu titled The Killer Speech Writing Workbook. Section headings and [page numbers] in it are:

 

   Introduction to the Speech Writing Workbook [4]

   Warm Up Exercise: Preventative medicine for writer’s block [6]

1) Start at the End [9]

2) Theme: The thread that weaves your speech together [12]

3) WIIFM – What’s in it for Me [17]

4) Identify Three or Four Key Points [22]

5) Start Strong [28]

6) Write Your First Draft [30]

7) Practise and Prepare [34]

    References [36]

 

The June 2018 issue of Toastmaster magazine has a profile article by Missy Sheehan about Peter Dhu on pages 12 to 14 titled Finding His Voice.  

 

And back on May 23, 2010 I blogged about another useful publication in a post titled Speechwriting advice US citizens already have paid for. I discussed Speechwriting in Perspective: A Brief Guide to Effective and Persuasive Communication which is Congressional Research Service Report #98-170. You can download a 26-page pdf here.

 

The Santa Claus image was adapted from this one at the Library of Congress.